Post by kestrelwing on Aug 1, 2007 18:51:55 GMT -5
Gender: Male. (if its okay.)
Age: 24 moons.
Clan: TempestClan. (if that is okay.)
Looks: Kestrelwing has coarsing black fur with dark brown paw and under-belly. He also has bright blue eyes. The dark brown in his paws and under-belly blend in well with his black fur, making him looking almost black. He also has short fur and keeps it very well groomed. His whiskers are white with some hints of black in it. Kestrelwing is blind but uses his other senses to see. He has sharp teeth and claws and a black nose.
Actions: Kestrelwing is kind. Though he may be kind, say anything cruel about his blindness and he is sharped tongue. He hates those who thinks of him as helpless. If a cat came into him clan and didn't belong, wanting to join, he would hope that the leader would think about more cats in the Clan. He is not one who will take loners so lightly. Sometimes He goes out to hunt alone, or patrol alone. Other than that Kestrelwing cares for his friends.
Past: Kestrelkit was born of a TempestClan tom and Queen. His mother died of giving birth and his father died on a patrol by a loner. He lived his life hard and rough as no cat wanted to be in charge of a blind kit. They all thought that he would die in a few days or so anyways. He proved them wrong by listening and smelling other objects and cats as a practice, trying to show that he could see, just only in a different way that they did.
Kestrelpaw had many adventures alone and often got into trouble for it. He would go out hunting alone or patroling without a warrior with him. His struggles in learning how to fight was hard for him. He couldnt see his target so he had to smell which way the cat was and were it was when it was standing there. His mentor had taught him how to stay upwind when fighting in a battle so that he could smell an enemy cat when a battle had begun.
Kestrelwing shaped up and stopped getting into trouble so much. His struggles now where to get others to be his friends and to understand that he could see in a different way. But this was diffucult to do as there were many who had doubt in him. He was appointed an apprentice, meaning that his leader had thought he could be a great warrior, but many other cats just shook their heads in disagreement and padded of, not even congradgulating him, which had hurt him deaply.
He finnaly became deputy and now serves his Clan with pride. Even though some dont believe that a blind cat shouldnt have the position, his apprentice, Fernpaw, couldnt argue with the fact that Kestrelwing should and this made Kestrelwing happy. His only friend was the leader and, if he could get Fernpaw to see, his apprentice was also his freind. His struggles now are the same as they were when he was a kit and an apprentice. None of the Clan members believe in him except for his Leader. Which also means that the she-cat are also not fond of him.
In Character: Krestlewing slipped out of camp. He needed some time alone and without other cats pitying him. He swerved through the forest trees, his fur brushing against the smelling bark. The bark smelt like rain water and moss, making the bark smelling good. He stopped, feeling the ground start to slope down, making a hill. He could smell a stream ahead of him and ran toward it. Reaching the small stream, he lapped up the water. The bushes trembled and his ears pricked up at the sound of paw steps coming near him. He smelled the air. A loner! he thought. He hissed and his fur prickled with unease as he got ready to fight.
Relationships/Kin: His mother, Dovesong, who is in StarClan and her father, Lionfrost, who is also in StarClan. No brothers or sisters. No enemys.
Last Edit: Aug 2, 2007 14:50:22 GMT -5 by kestrelwing
Okay. I need to see more in the history. I want it seperated into sections of Kithood, apprenticeship, warriorhood, and deputyship. Also, I want to hear about his struggles of learning when he is blind as an apprentice, and I want to hear about his struggles now.